Tuesday 26 March 2013

Wrong Email Address (Daniel, Jedidiah)


Wrong Email Address
EXT.  -  BEACH  -  DAY   
Man named Mr Brody relaxing on the beach and calling his wife.

MR BRODY:
Hi my dear, how are you? How’s work?
MRS BRODY:
   Hi honey, things have been going smoothly, don’t worry. The pay will be worth it. I’ll be there tomorrow!
MR BRODY:
I see, alright then! See you tomorrow! Will send you an email ASAP!

INT.  -  HOTEL ROOM  -  MIDNIGHT
Jason is at his laptop typing an email to his wife. Mistyping a letter in her address.

INT.  -  HOME -  AFTERNOON
Elder woman’s friends consoling her.

ELDERLY WOMAN’S FRIENDS:
I’m so sorry about your husband. He was a good man. I’ve never seen a man so dedicated as a preacher. I’m so so sorry.  

Elderly woman cries uncontrollably. Friends say bye to elderly woman. She enters her room.

INT. - ELDERLY WOMAN’S ROOM - AFTERNOON
She switches on a computer and checks her email.

ELDERLY WOMAN:
What on earth? What on earth!? AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! (Faints and falls to the floor)

At the sound, her family rushed into the room and saw this note on the screen.

THE NOTE:
Dearest Wife, just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow. P.S. Sure is hot down here.




Wrong email address(Divya and Odelia)

Wrong Email Address
INT-AIRPORT -DAY
Sam is at the Airport waiting for his flight to Mexico. He sent a text to his wife,Amy who was on a business trip. They had planned to go to Mexico for a vacation together but Amy had to go for a last minute business trip so they planned to meet the next day.

SAM:
Hey dear, will send you a email when I reach Mexico. Just checked in our luggage. Love you.

INT-HOTEL IN MEXICO-DAY
Sam reached his hotel and went to sent a email to his wife to inform her about his whereabouts.

SAM:
"Hey Dear.....I miss you...."(typing)

Satisfied, he clicked 'send'and went to sleep. 

INT-A WIDOW'S HOUSE-DAY
An hour later, a widow checks her email.Her husband, a preacher had passed away just the day before.  

WIDOW:
NO!

She screamed and then fainted.
Her family ran in to find her lying on the cold hard ground.

FAMILY:
Oh! Oh!

They saw the email on the screen.

FAMILY:
Oh my gosh! Trouble,trouble,trouble!

The email said: Hey Dear, just checked in. Everything is prepared for your arrival tomorrow. Miss you.
 P.S It sure is hot down here!

Sam had sent the email to the wrong address! 











                 
                       

Wrong Email Address Script by Greg Lim and Joel Tan



INT - AIRPORT - AFTERNOON

Mrs Mary Tan:
Have a safe trip!
Mr Tan:
You too dear.


The woman gives her husband a kiss then they went to their respective counters and checked in their luggage.


INT - PLANE - AFTERNOON


The man boards the plane and the plane takes off


INT - ANOTHER AIRPORT - EVENING

The man arrives at the destination and collects his luggage


He flags down a taxi


INT - TAXI - EVENING


Mr Tan:
Can you drive me to Hotel Tiara please?

Taxi Driver:
Okay, can.

INT - HOTEL TIARA - NIGHT

They arrive at Hotel Tiara and the man checks inReceptionist:
How may I help you?

Mr Tan:
I made a booking earlier for the suite for 2.

Receptionist:
Let me check, yup. Heres  your room key.

The man gives a nod of thanks and made his way to the 11th floor where his room is located.

INT - HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT

The man settles down his luggage and takes out his laptop

He types:
Dearest wife, Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow.
P.S Sure is hot down here
And sends it to marry_tan@gmail.com

CAPTION: Meanwhile...

INT - WOMAN’S HOUSE - NIGHT

A woman, Marry tan, is checking her email (marry_tan@gmail.com) and suddenly receives a new email.

The email reads:
Dearest wife, Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow.
P.S Sure is hot down here

She screams and faints

Her family rushes into her room and was shocked to see the email.

They couldn’t believe their eyes, as the woman’s husband had died a few days before.

Wrong Email Address

INT . - At the airport - Morning
The husband send his wife off at the airport.
HUSBAND:
Be safe I will be waiting at the resort for you
WIFE:
Ok I will see you there.

INT. - At the hotel room - Afternoon
The husband lied in bed and decided to write a quick email to assure his wife that he has arrived.When he was typing the email , he typed in the wrong email and it was sent to the wife of a dead preacher.

INT . - The widow's house - Afternoon
The widow was checking her email and she saw the email and it read: Dearest wife, Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow. P.S It’s hot down here.
WIDOW:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

INT . - The widow's house - Afternoon
The widow's family went into the room, saw her unconscious on the ground, saw the email and was in shocked.

Done by Markus Chin and Ng Yu Yang

Wrong Email Address (Jarrett & Shawnn)

INT. - WIFE'S DESK -MORNING

The elderly preacher's wife sat at her desk. She took out her bucket list and began to reminisce the moments she had yet to spend with her husband. She heaved a deep sigh. Tears welled up in her eyes as it trickled down, each drop made of pure grief and anguish dripping down her wrinkled face.

WIFE'S THOUGHTS:
There's just too many things I wanted to do in my life...

She started to prioritise the things she wanted to do most. First on the list, she wanted to swim in a pool of soda. 

INT. - SUPERMARKET -MORNING

She went to the supermarket nearby and bought 10 gallons of soda. 

EXT. -WIFE'S BACKYARD -AFTERNOON

She prepared an inflatable kiddy pool in her backyard. She poured the soda into it. Without any hesitation, she jumped into it. Splash.

WIFE'S THOUGHTS:
Oh yes! That feels wonderful. I feel the carbon tingling my wrinkled skin all over. I wish I'd done this so much earlier! Its so much fun!

She started drinking the soda as she swam. 

WIFE'S THOUGHTS:
Now its time for the second thing on my list.

EXT. -PATHWAY -EVENING

WIFE'S THOUGHTS:
I have always wanted to steal candy from a kid!

She walked on the pathway near her neighbourhood. A child caught her attention. He was holding a large and delectable lollipop. A cunning idea struck her. She sauntered casually towards the child with ease, arousing no suspicion. As she got close, she snatched the lollipop and giggled hysterically as she escaped from the scene of the crime. 

INT. -WIFE'S BEDROOM

As the sun began to set, she settled down on her bedside. She took out all her possession: Money, jewellery and placed it on her bed. She wanted to create a replica of a Chinese Emperor Tomb. The clock ticked. It was approaching twelve midnight. She lied on the bed, arms crossed. She shut her eyes. The clock ticked past twelve. She did not die. She fell into a deep slumber after such an exciting day. 

Wrong Email Address by Clive Tua and Dion


EXT. ARRIVAL HALL - DAY
Sean walked out of the private jet.

SEAN
Sure it’s hot here.

INT. HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Sean puts down his luggage and takes out his computer. He decided to send his wife a quick email to inform her about his arrival. Unfortunately, when typing her address, he mistyped a letter in the email address.

SEAN
“To: blahblahblat@gmail.com. Dearest Wife, Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow. P.S. Sure is hot down here.”

SEAN
Well I’m done with the letter. Now, send.

INT. PREACHER'S HOUSE - DAY
The recipient at the other end happens to be an elderly preacher’s wife whose husband had passed away only the day before. She opened the email.

PREACHER’S WIFE
“Dearest Wife, Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival...”

The preacher’s wife then let out a piercing scream and collapsed to the floor. Her family then rushed in to find her on the ground unconscious. Her family then read the email on the screen. 

CHILD
Wow, she could have gotten the largest shock of her life.

AthiyahTA & Jenova Pillai Script Writing


Wrong Email Address

INT. - HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
Mr. And Mrs. Adler are going on a vacation. Mr. Adler has reached the hotel in their destination first, since Mrs. Adler is on a business trip, and is sending an email to his wife about his whereabouts and about Mrs. Adler’s arrival. Typing sounds are heard, but no words are spoken. Mr. Adler will then be seen clicking on the ‘Enter’ button, signaling a sent mail.

INT. - GRIEVING WIDOW’S ROOM - NIGHT
Mrs.Peterson, the late Mr.Peterson’s wife, is grieving over her husband’s (who is a preacher) recent death. An email suddenly appears in her inbox, and she opens it and reads it.

Mrs.Peterson:
AHHHH!!!! (Screams)

Mrs.Peterson then faints, falling onto the floor. The rest of her family hear the scream and rush in.

Mrs.Peterson’s Son:
Mother! What happened? Wake up! (Shakes Mrs.Peterson)
Mrs. Peterson’s daughter:
Don’t scare us like that! Mother! Please! Wake up! (Laptop screen light catches her eyes) (Reads email) (Looks shocked)
Mrs.Peterson’s Son:
Sister! Don’t just leave me there! Help me check mother’s pulse! (Sees shock on Mrs.Peterson’s face) What’s...wrong? (Reads email) (Eyes widen)

The content of the email will then be displayed in a narration (In Mr.Adler’s voice).

Narration:
Dearest Wife,

Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow.

P.S. Sure is hot down here.

The clock then ticks 12:00 am, as the late preacher's wife dies.

-END-

Wrong Email Address by Tiffany Leong and Nah Jie Han

Wrong Email Address
INT. - COUPLE’S LIVING ROOM - DAY
Husband and Wife are talking about going on a vacation.

HUSBAND:
Do you want to go to this destination for a vacation, it’s at half-price now? (Points to an advertisement)

WIFE:
I have to go on a business trip.

HUSBAND:
I think I’ll go to the destination first and then you can meet me there the next day.

WIFE:
Alright. Email me when you check in.

INT. - DESTINATION - DAY
Husband is typing an email to Wife.

INT. - AIRPLANE - DAY
Wife is seated in the plane in the business class section.

INT. - DESTINATION - DAY
Husband types receiver’s email address and misspells “lim” as “lin”.

EXT. - GRAVEYARD - NIGHT
Widow is grieving over her husband’s death which happened the previous day.

INT. - WIDOW’S BEDROOM - DAY
Widow checks her email, screams and faints.

Hearing the scream, the family rushes into the room and sees the email.

FAMILY:
“Dearest Wife, Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow. P.S. Sure is hot down here.” (Reads in their heads)

WRONG EMAIL ADDRESS - Done by Warren and Sean Lim


Wrong email address
INT. - Airport - Afternoon
The couple hugged each other good bye.

HUSBAND:
I'll see you tomorrow after you are done with your business. Love you.
WIFE:
See you too. Love you too.

INT. - Hotel Room - Night
Husband took out his laptop from his luggage after settling down.

HUSBAND:
Ah, finally able to rest… I should definitely send an email to her before heading to bed, don't want to make her worry do I?(murmuring to himself)

Husband uses his laptop to access his email.

HUSBAND:
Her email is MsHusband@gmail.com right?(Confirming with himself)

HUSBAND:
Compose… To: MsHusband1@gmail.com… Dearest Wife, just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow. P.S. Sure is hot down here.(Whispering as he types)

HUSBAND:
Send! Time to head to bed!

Husband shuts down the laptop and jumped onto his bed, falling asleep in no time at all.

INT. - Elderly Couple's House - Night
Suddenly, the email alert system of the computer on the table made a ringing sound to alert that there was a mail. The elderly preacher's wife, whose husband had passed away only the day before, went to check the computer.

ELDERLY PREACHER'S WIFE:
I have a mail?(Complaining)

The elderly preacher's wife went to the table and took a short glance at the monitor.

ELDERLY PREACHER'S WIFE:
WHAT?(Screaming)

The elderly preacher's wife screamed and fell onto the ground with a thud in a dead faint. Her family heard the scream and rushed into the room.

FAMILY MEMBERS:
What happened…

They looked at the screen of the computer and saw the email that was sent to her. 



Nicholas Lam (15) and Markus Lim (17)


Wrong Email Address


INT. – HOTEL ROOM – AFTERNOON


A man is sitting in front of a computer, typing on the keyboard

SEAN:
I wonder how much longer Tiffany will take to reach here

Sean  turns off the computer, and exits the room.

INT. – CHURCH – NIGHT

A woman is seated in-front of a computer, drinking a cup of coffee and checking her mail

NERIUM:
AAAH! (High-Pitched Scream)

She faints, and spills the coffee onto the table. Family rushes into room, and sees the fainted [NAME].

NICHOLAS:
Let’s see what this email says.

The family reads the email.

CAPTION : Dearest Wife, Just got checked in. Everything prepared for your arrival tomorrow.
P.S. Sure is hot down here.

Script by Ding ruoqian and Ancel


WRONG EMAIL ADDRESS

A couple was going for a holiday but the wife had to go on a business trip.So the husband agreed to meet her at the resort.


Int. -Changi Airport - Day

Husband:
Ok darling, you have a safe trip ok? I’ll be waiting for you at Bali. I’ll get everything prepared.You don’t need to worry about anything.

WIFE:
Thank you dear.You take care. I’ll be there before you know it.


Wife kisses husband and walks into the immigration. As she walks,she waves back to her husband, bidding him farewell.


Int. -Couple’s home - Night

THe husband packs all the necessary things.As he gets everything he checks in on his wife, telling her that everything is ok and to check whether she’s ok.


The next day, he goes to Bali and checks into the Grand Hyatt and he books many surprises for his wife. Spas, divings, tours and the list goes on.

Int. -Suite hotel room - Night

The husband sends an email to his wife, checking in and on her, telling her everything is ok and asking if her work is done.But when he was typing in the email, he typed in the wrong email and it was sent to an old lady.




Int. -Old lady’s house
Coincidentally, the old lady’s husband passed away the day before and she is still in great depression. When she checks her email, she gets the shock of her life, she immediately fainted. When her children read the email, they too were dumbfounded.It read: Hello dear, everything is prepared for your arrival. There’s a big surprise in stall for you too.
P.S It’s hot down here.

Friday 8 March 2013

Characterisation (Reflection)



Dear young ladies an gentlemen

(1) Through the recent activity of doing the character map and conducting an interview with Ian Rellik(Renwick) and Jacob, what have you learnt about characterization?

(2) Does characterisation on films/videos differ from that on paper/writing?

Shawnn Tan group's video

Pls comment below.

Sean Lim group's video

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